Does it read something like this?

"25 year old ex-RJ FO who wasn't making enough money, takes a medical "out" so he can get work to get a second income on the side to supplement his LTD. After a new contract, and several years of additional longevity accrued while on LTD, his pay rate is enough that he can come back, pull gear in the right seat of a 756, and make enough money to pay his bills.
Then brags about it all, and his brilliance, on an online forum.
Airmanship - 5.0
Judgement - 1.0
Credibiliy - 0.0

Recommend field promotion to Chief Pilot."