Thanks for the initial feedback, guys. I'll be sure to put a disclaimer so people know the stadium had no one in it during the imaginary air-sucking test, and we’ll keep ‘Murica safe.

My issues with these projects in the past has been that very smart people find many little nit-picks with the details. I know I'll never fully please everyone but I do my best not to offend the fanboys of any subject by laziness in research or misrepresentation.

So you guys don't see any technical errors I should fix as you glance over this? Should I maybe post to “Hangar talk” or something, to get more eyeballs on it? I really want it to be solid. I appreciate any help!