A friend of mine sent it to me. My thoughts are you should vote it down for:

A. You retained average day instead of getting min day or average calendar day that now seams standard.
B. You should get 15% 401k DOS.
C. Rates are ok but should be close to 260 DOS.
D. PBS should be off the table or the company should offer a lot more for it. Once you buy it its yours for life.

NK is profitable. Never settle for the first offer. By voting it down you have nothing to lose and everything to gain as they WILL come back to the table and sweeten the deal. Just my 2 cents. Having watched APA **** things up for 25 odd years its always up to the pilots to hold the line.
Good luck.