Example of conversation I need critiqued
“Quick, contact traffic control,” Cynthia urged.
Perez flipped a switch.
“Cleveland Centre, LASS two niner seven eight heavy. Declaring Pan Pan Pan. Suspected explosive on board. Unable to land at Dulles,” Captain Perez said.
“LASS two niner seven eight heavy, Cleveland Centre. Roger. Stand by.”
“We can head for the Allegheny National Forest, it’s about twenty minutes flight time on heading 085,” Cynthia told Perez.
“LASS two niner seven eight heavy, Cleveland Centre. Do you have an aircraft handling situation?”
“Cleveland Centre, LASS two niner seven eight heavy. Negative. Device is nuclear. Request routing to Allegheny Forest area. We want to minimize civilian casualties,” Captain Perez suggested.
“LASS two niner seven eight heavy, Cleveland Centre. Roger. Stand by.”
“What the hell is going on?” Captain Perez asked Cynthia.