You’ll be fine because of your military background; if you were civilian only I’d say you may need some more TT from historical reference. I’m not sure why you’d pay someone to review your App; there are literally hundreds of recent new-hire military applicants that you probably know. Ask for theirs, get an idea of “what” to put “where” and save the $$. Hint, every PCS is a job, every qual (OCS/API/SL/DL/CRM-F/FCF/etc) has some education component to it and should be placed as such. Good luck!