Thanks for taking a look at it! Actually, I probably should have explained a little more in more first post. This paper has already been handed in and graded. (For what it's worth, I received an A). For that reason, I left out the bibliography and removed some info on the cover page. If you would like to see the bibliography I am happy to provide that info.
What I was looking for was some feedback on the actually content. Essentially, I stated that the major airlines are dying a slow death and may die completely if they don't make some changes. This was due to the terrible service quality they provided and the fact that the whole regional airlines (which are providing the worst service quality) are tied into the operations. This was the reason I posted in the regional section.... I wanted to see what other regional pilots thought. Feel free to skip the history section as well... it is there more for some general background info which I assume all of you are pretty aware of.
Also, for what it's worth, I work everday as a pilot and have several thousand hours, and not "just" a college student.
Anyone else with some insight on this topic? You agree or am I talking nonsense???
Can this get moved back into the major and or regional section? That is really the audience I wanted to speak to and what the paper is all about!