Originally Posted by
pilot754
Why CommutAir:
From a geographer’s standpoint, your website encapsulates my very thoughts perfectly: “Based in the beautiful Lake Champlain Valley between New York's Northern Adirondacks and Vermont's Green Mountains, CommutAir provides scheduled air transportation to 24 cities in 8 States”.
Geospatially speaking, the location of your company and routes are both very picturesque and different from Los Angeles, CA!
Furthermore, you fly B1900D’s, a turbo-prop which would make for a nice transition into a Part 121 carrier from General Aviation. It would be a great learning experience and stepping stone.
CommutAir has stability within the company and job security. As far as I know, you are not seeking to take over the regional market. In addition, your company will be receiving Q200’s-Dash 8’s in early 2007. My understanding is that it will be replacing the B1900s and based at CLE.
On a final note, I want to work for a company that sends an applicant positive space travel pass, and picks up hotel room and tax, demonstrating care of its employees.
Holy smokes...they will see right through that one!
If you are dead-stuck on writing Commutair a "you had me at hello" statement, write something genuine and straight to the point. Don't pu$$y-foot around and fluff it up...
If I was reading this cover letter, or whatever it will be stuck in...I would toss it in the garbage...
Be straight, to the point, with minimal fluff!
My .02 cents
Lax