Hello. You can find a good example of a pilot resume in the download center of the Int. Pilot Network.
International Pilot Network | Pilot Document Download - Pilot CVs, Pilot Questionnaires, CRM and Human Factor Training..
It was successful with Cathay, Dragonair, Swiss and British Midland.
When on the above page navigate to the 'Pilot Interview' section and look for the file called 'Pilot Application Resume Page' ... or just enter it as search term...
PM me if you want me to review the CV...Cheers.