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#4411
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Joined APC: Jul 2013
Posts: 75
You could use a comma after the is in your statement. It provides better pause and clarity for the ease of the reader. The comma is used where ambiguity might otherwise arise.
I'm not sure the quotes are needed around take away, either. It may be better to avoid this type of technical jargon altogether, and substitute for a more well-suited word or phrase, such as lesson learned.
I'm not sure the quotes are needed around take away, either. It may be better to avoid this type of technical jargon altogether, and substitute for a more well-suited word or phrase, such as lesson learned.
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Joined APC: Dec 2009
Position: Going to hell in a bucket, but enjoying the ride .
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Joined APC: Feb 2006
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